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Paint me a picture of tender eyes
of determined love, of countless tries,
paint it the soft hues of blue
paint with every love that is true.

Paint it with your beating heart
paint it with the abuse that tore things apart
paint it with your every sin
paint it with the blood on your skin.

Don't forget to do it with sorrow
or the feeling of an uncertain tomorrow.
When you paint it, remember me
because sometimes you're all I can see.

Paint me a picture of the past
of when time didn't move so fast,
paint me a picture of loneliness
and across my cheek please brush a kiss.
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:iconnot-in-so-many-words:
this one has inspired me. I loved every bit of it. Mind if i write a response?
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~nocoolnamesavailible May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Not at all! In fact, I am quite flattered. >//w//< go right ahead~
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:iconnot-in-so-many-words:
I'll try to do yours justice :nod:
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:iconkay-march:
Painted picture, portrait of words... call it brush or pen, ink or blood, it's pure poetry, of course it's personal...
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:iconmysocksrock:
Great job on this, I love it.
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~nocoolnamesavailible May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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*shad0wbeast May 19, 2012  Student Writer
This is amazing...would you mind if I featured it on my journal feature? I would understand if you don't want me to.
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~nocoolnamesavailible May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, and wow! Please, please, go ahead. No one has ever asked me that before.. :) I'm glad you like it so much.
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*shad0wbeast May 19, 2012  Student Writer
no problem! It will be up on monday! I am trying to do it every monday with 10 pieces of literature I faved. (feel free to copy the idea! It's meant to help spread literature awareness on DA lol)
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~nocoolnamesavailible May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sweet, cool. :) That's actually a good idea.. I'm not on DA often enough to do that though. :/ Maybe once school is out I'll have time. >w< I'll try it!
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